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Inmate Rainbow Dash Remake [Old]

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This version is now outdated. Here is the newest version: Prisoner Rainbow Dash | Definitive Edition

After a girls night out with the mane 6, Rainbow is drunk from too many ciders. Twilight insisted that Rainbow sleeps at her library for the night, but Rainow dash, too stuborn to take advice from an egghead, attempts to fly back to her cloud home. She swirlved left and right before crashing into a house and leaving a big hole. The owner called the police who upon trying to arrest rainbow dash were puked on by the drunken mare before she passed out. Hours later, Dashie woke up in jail cell on a cot. As she regained concious, she noticed that she was shackled in chains and was clad in an orange jumpsuit. Still hung over, she freaked out and cried for help. She was later informed that she had been charged with flying under the influence
, drunk in public, assaulting a police officer, and resisting arrest. She was sentenced to two years at Canterlot Royal Prison.

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

You have improved in this one compared to the older prisoner Dash image! I love how she's sitting with her tail curled. She looks ashamed and she seems to be wishing for a visitor. Your description for this pic is also great, because I love hearing about how Dashie wakes up in her orange jumpsuit aha!!

In my opinion, she looks a bit too young than she did before... I think it might be the thickness of her mane. It seems the mane (top and side) are a bit too thin for Dashie. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/> If it was thicker (more fluffy) then she would be cooler... but I had to take off from the impact for this little detail. (that is just my opinion, might be a style you are going for...

Speaking of style, small details in your style that stand out to me are the eyes and also those chains on her wing restraints. Chains are hard to do and I think you're figuring out what looks the best for those wing restraints <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

The background seems to fall flat a little bit though, since the toilet should maybe have the same shadow as the bed. There should be something (maybe just some shading) that makes the toilet pop out of the wall. That's why I had to take off from vision and technique