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Inmate Rarity Remake

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An alternate ending to Suited for for Success where Rarity's design's were so terrible, she was arrested for fashion crimes and was punished with ironically, another fasion crime

Original:Inmate Rarity

11/07/16 Update: Now features an OC by :iconfuzzcut:
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

alright, let's get started

the "lock" on their horns is a smart idea, noone wants a magic-user roam freely in a prison

derpy as guard, oh well... we all know what she will say when they all escape because of a "mistake" <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="387" title=";) (Wink)"/>

the look on rarity's face, I can almost see her jumping onto a couch and cry

the overall idea not bad, but here are some things you might change:

the way the dress of vinyl looks like: the left leg of her is kinda "blown up", and on the right one I am missing the border between leg and body

the barbwire could be a bit more periodic

maybe try to make both background and characters with the same artstyle, that would be more "pleasing" for the eye

but this is all just nitpicking, overall its a nice work. and as I am a beginner myself, I'm not sure if I'm even qualified to write a critique, but you requested one, and I rarely see critiques on artwork of people who don't have thousands of watchers. also, friendship is magic, sharing is caring, I hope you are not disappointed with this critique